[metrickid]

Originally Posted by Zing

Original

https://farm5.staticflickr.com/4439/...176789fe_b.jpg



Edit

https://farm5.staticflickr.com/4427/...367bdfcb_b.jpg



Final

https://farm5.staticflickr.com/4383/...75fa81b0_b.jpg

Your two crops make the eye go to the black part of the image, and not the girl/headphones.
The final edit is waaaay to soft for my liking too, but that is just down to taste though...